Tuesday, August 7, 2012

The Robins Were Not on the Lawn

Sacred Heart Park in Andover, MA
The robins were not on the lawn,
They have all flown away,
the robins are gone,
the robins are gone,
on this hot August day
when the temperature rises they live in the shade,
until evening comes when they take to the sky
the robins are flying home.

Kathie Adams Brown (August 2, 2012)
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2 comments:

  1. GuyAugust 20, 2012 at 10:03 AM

    Hi Kathie

    I like your use of the refrain/reptition with the use of rhyme. Very nice.

    Guy

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  2. Kathie BrownSeptember 7, 2012 at 12:56 AM

    Thanks guy. I am so glad that you appreciated it!

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