graphite and prisma color on paper.
On cryptic wings
Clinging
To the rough bark of a pine
Creeping
Up the solid girth
On tiny feet
With curved beak
Probing
In dark crevices
For that juicy morsel
That food, that sustenance
To carry us through winter
A plain bird
A subtle thing
It brought me life
On cryptic wings.
~Kathie Adams Brown (10-11-09)
OSI Prompt: Talisman
so cute dear:)...loved it:)
ReplyDeleteHow lovely, I just can see it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing that really feels!
ReplyDeleteKathie--
ReplyDeleteI really really liked this one!
And it was so sweet how the last few lines moved to first person...it's clear that this lovely bird is a talisman for you!
Hi Kathie, I believe every word you have said. I know these birds mean a awfully lot to you.
ReplyDeleteWelcome back too, I have been missing you.
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Terrific drawing and charming words that sing of talisman and hope!
ReplyDeleteHow lovely, the drawing and the poem Kathie....so enjoyed them,:-)
ReplyDelete.. how lovely ! ..
ReplyDeleteA beautiful definition of talisman--one that opens up rather than limits.
ReplyDeleteHello! Nicely done visuals in the poem and your artwork. I'm a bird lover, too and your ending says it all. (I'm an artist, photographer and poet, too.) Glad I found your blog through poetry links.
ReplyDeleteMy google account is not linked to my new typepad blog so here is the link to my poem (for a different prompt than OSI), but hope you enjoy regardless!
Click here for my poem please
oh, I love your talisman! sweet piece.
ReplyDeleteI am not surprised to find that your talisman is a bird!
ReplyDeleteGreat drawing and a poem that I understand very well.
How gorgeously written and beautifully drawn. I love both.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! Both the artwork and the poem!
ReplyDeleteYellow tulip, Spacedlaw and Vita Stunder, thank you!
ReplyDeleteBeth P, it is one of those things I really didn't think about until I started to write!
Jim, thank you! What a nice thing to say! I have missed participating!
Tumblewords, Bernie, zoya Guatam, Thank you also for visiting and commenting.
Sandy, I hadn't thought of that! Thanks for the encouragement!
S, whoever you are, it's always nice to meet a fellow bird lover, artist and poet!
Tammie lee, thank you!
fourwinds, I saw my very first Brown creeper on a pine tree in my back yard when I lived in Maine! It was so delightful that it captured my soul! I felt as if the forest were lettig me in on some great secret, as if she were showing me her treasures. I still feel this way.
Patois and Mary333, thank you both for your kind words.
Kathie, a lovely meaningful poem to wo with your so perfectly observed drawing...wish I could draw like that again, its been a long long time.
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful! beautiful art work and words.
ReplyDeleteAnn
Sorry I missed this one, Kathie. The image in words and drawing of the little bird grooming the bark is really great.
ReplyDeleteArija, did you use to draw? I haven't drawn anything in a while either! This was fun!
ReplyDeleteAnn, thank you for your visit and your comments!
Christine, I am so glad you stopped by. Thank you!